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[The Story Of Phil]

I'll probably end up forgetting it.

But part of that's because my memory sucks.

Anywho, obviously the graphics need work. There's no question, but that's not the highlight of the cartoon.
Part of the entire thing was hilarious just because of the narrarator's voice. That helped with a lot of the jokes. I don't usually find the penis jokes funny, but this one made me laugh.
I'll give you a 5/10 just because the n****r joke was hilarious.

Slintas responds:

The graphics are supposed to be crappy. But thanks.

[This Wall]

Needs a bit of work.

This could be taken as a serious concept, but there need to be a few tweaks.
For one, the animation is a bit awkward. Yes, the art is fine, but the actual animating seems a bit sketchy.

And, to be honest, there is no real reason to submit just a work in progress to the actual site. That's what the NG Alphas section in NG.Mag is for.

DemonPrototype01 responds:

Ah, thank you for this information. I honestly was not aware of NG Alpha nor NGMag.
The reason to submit the work in progress was to catch errors and tasks that would be overwhelming to go back and fix. the sketchy animation was done on purpose, but probably just looks like I did it wrong, I bet.

[Bunnykill 3 Vol.2]

It's about...freaking...time....

No, seriously, I know how it is: how sometimes you don't have the inspiration to make something even though you want to.

Anyway, I thought it was great. I was surprised how even with all of the action going on, there's no lag (I've had that problem). Seems to be an awful lot of Star Wars references, though.

Nice cliffhanger, too. Not to rush, but could you find that inspiration for a sequel (if there will be one) sooner?

Awesome.

Mottis responds:

Thanks.

Haha the cliffhanger in the end is just a secret little easter egg, nothing more. I will not, I repeat NOT continue this storyline.

Next Bunnykill will have a completely new story and theme.

[Billy's Christmas]

not too bad

the graphics weren't great, but they could've been worse I guess. some of the jokes were kinda funny though. it looks like there were some sound problems when he talked. I guessing it's either that the mouths didn't match the words or when the words he said were put in the flash, the setting was on Start and not Stream. I've made the same mistake. anyway, not too bad.

Cinnabonmon responds:

Yeah, im new to voices so the lip synching sucked

[The Egg Kid's Antics]

I didn't understand it

I'm sure there's a story in there somewhere, but I didn't get what it was about at all. The art was completely horrible but could use some work and add more sound. It's a good start, but get some experience under your belt.

acdcrox2999 responds:

well you should keep in mind when i made this, i didnt even know how to shade so...

[Sonic Breaks his Neck]

dude, your frickin twisted...

and I'm not saying that as a Sonic fan, that was just sick, is it supposed to be funny if someone blows their brains out or breaks their neck? lay off the pills

I'll agree with you, though, that Rouge is a slut

Splapp-me-do responds:

What do you expect with a Flash with an "Excessive Violence" rating... or whatever it says.

[Bunnykill 3 Vol.1]

Holy s***, this is awesome!!!

I never get tired of watching this movie; I've already seen it like 10 times! This is hands down the best flash movie ever, have a white rabbit killing one hundred other rabbits and you have pure gold! By the way, the thing with the brown rabbits having purple lightsticks, is that a Mace Windu joke?

Mottis responds:

if you want to think it that way:D
There was no Mace windu joke, but now that i look at it... yeah... i think you can see it that way.

[USA vs. Japan]

a veeerrry low budget movie...

There are a few things you could've done better on especially the sound. Dude, those were some lame explosion noises. Are the Japanese really that annoying when they talk?

suppi responds:

yes, they are. hooo boy are they.